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A well lit place

 

our lives are like blank canvas,

we are painted each day anew,

 

each stroke of failure 

each brush with pain

a life formed ,

comes into view.

 

 bright  the sunlit colors

mercy and grace shine thru,

 we are the highlighted hues of love and peace,

with shades, of joy and blue,

 

now this completed and brilliant work of art,     

in hallowed halls of forgiveness hangs,

where gratitude and compassion,

cast gleams of kindness, 

healing, this once lonely space.

 

onto the empty floors of the fallen,

where canvas like me await,

for the hand of truth to paint it,

into, a well lit place.

 

Inspired by Lamentations 3:22;23 

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NeColeB74

THE FIRST LINE OF THE

THE FIRST LINE OF THE VERSE:..LIVES ARE LIKE BLANK CANVASES...PAINTED ON EACH DAY ANEW...I RELATE TO THIS SO MUCH...I'M NEW TO THE SITE AND EXTENDED A WELCOMING INVITE TO VIEW MY WORK...PLEASE...FEEDBACK NEED AND MUCH CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM...THANK YOU.... LOVE THIS, PEACE
NeColeB74

I JUST REALIZED I QUOTED YOU

I JUST REALIZED I QUOTED YOU IN MY PROFILE. YOUR PIECE OF DIVINE EXTENSION OF LAMENTATIONS IS GREAT! PEACE
NeColeB74

YOU ROCK THIS!!! OH I CAN

YOU ROCK THIS!!! OH I CAN NOT STOP READING IT...IT SPEAKS TO ME YOU SEE. I HAVE AND HAD A HARD TIME SPEAKING AND EXPRESSING MYSELF...YOUR POEM INSPIRES ME TO CONTINUE WRITING...