Unknown...just a quick piece

Listen to the audio file attached. This was something I did a long time ago. It is amazing how your style changes as time progresses.

 

Im bout to spit the truth to ya how it really is,

 

This is the world in which we all live,

 

Stench in the air

 

From all the souls we done killed,

 

Our battlefield is full, covered, and filled,

 

Cuz we dealin a deal with our flesh for a feely feel,

 

Or better yet for a puff of a philly feel,

 

Now ya cookies got stole I call it a quick steal,

 

Another soldier down, bullet in the chest,

 

Right next to his grandma recently laid to rest,

 

All because he wanted the girl to be impressed,

 

Or she wanted to tease guy with a short dress;

 

But in my mind I am a bit perplexed,

 

Why would one digress, when they could progress?

 

By living in today's riches and being quiet blessed.

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Comments  

drskillzz's picture
Nice work C. What are you using to record/upload audio?
themotivator's picture
Wonderful! You should consider performing this live if you haven't already--truly content meant to be shared.
cdrizzle's picture
You are right! I def. want to get back to performing my poetry. I have so many unfinished ones that I want to revisit and possibly recite somewhere. I even see myself doing it over a tight beat ---- rap poetry.